Reviews by KermitKlein
Summary: The story starts the day after Oliver confronts his mother about Thea's paternity before going back to the Foundry. Sara shows up and the two sleep together. Felicity finds Oliver and Sara together in the Foundry the day after they slept together.
Categories: Primetime TV > Arrow > Alternate History > Drama Characters: Felicity Smoak, Oliver Queen
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64898 Read Count: 21771
Published: Apr 26, 2014 Updated: Oct 21, 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: KermitKlein Signed
So when are you updating again? LOL. I'm very interested to see what happens. Already loving Felicity. Poor Oliver. He needs to get it together.
Date: Apr 28, 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: KermitKlein Signed
Seriously don't know if I feel sorry for Oliver for his stupidity or want to shake him for his stupidity. Great update. I'm wondering who is watching Felicity and why. I think she should have told Oliver even though Diggle is also a good choice but I clearly understand why she doesn't want to tell Oliver. She was smart however to call Roy for backup just in case something did go wrong. Can't wait for the next update.

PS. Isabel needs to take a hike off of a tall building. LOL

Author's Response: KK - I love you hate for Isabel as much as mine. She's such a great character though to cause trouble :). Oliver is someone you just want to shake, that's why he reminds me so much of Jason Morgan. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and I really hope you like what comes next. :)! I can't wait for the Finale Wed. I've already told my family I'm watching live no matter what! Thanks again for your comments. It's so appreciated and keeps me focused on this story!
Date: May 08, 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: KermitKlein Signed
That boy is whipped & don't even realize it. Good grief, Oliver need to just stamp on Felicity's head "she's mine", the way that he's acting. I have to laugh at Sara's insecurities. The girl is a crime fighter but yet feels inferior to Felicity as she should.
LOL at Felicity thinking Diggle's watch didn't have real diamonds in them. Evidently, she forgets that Diggle makes very good money & considers her worthy of having something expensive to wear. Love the update.

Author's Response: LOL KK! He is whipped but not ready to admit it just yet. I'm glad you noticed Sara's insecurities, she was definitely trying to mark her territory. I felt it was important that Sara didn't feel that secure in her relationship with Oliver. And yeah, Felicity just doesn't realize she's worth real diamonds even from a friend. Thanks for reading and leaving a review it means so much!
Date: May 26, 2014
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: KermitKlein Signed
Lawd, the poor boy has his dim bulb moments. He should know that taking Sara would not sit well with Felicity but then again, he need to figure out that situation all together.
Wondering who is at Felicity's door. Part of me is thinking it's Diggle to let her know that he told Oliver what was going on in her life. She's not going to be happy about that.
Great update.

Author's Response: As much as Oliver wants to break it off with Sara, he still feels a lot of guilt when it comes to her so he's just not ready to say no to her. Taking her to the Benefit is I think a way to ease that guilt. As far as whose at the door it will be revealed next Chapter. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! I so appreciate it!!!
Date: May 26, 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: KermitKlein Signed
FINALLY! I finally got enough time to actually sit down and read the chapters I haven't read. First off 1. Love the way you're writing Thea. She's nowhere nearly as annoying as she is on the show. 2. Love how limited Laurel is in this flick especially with the constant spoilers about her & this upcoming season 3. I KNEW IT! I had a feeling that Sara was somehow involved in Felicity's stalking. Love that Oliver cut her loose but I have this overwhelming feeling that she's going to try to redeem herself & end up getting in the way. Like that Oliver made his intentions known to Felicity before she got kidnapped. So smart of Diggle with the watch even though I had a feeling he put a bug on her somewhere. Great update.

Author's Response: KK!!!! So glad you FINALLY caught up :)!!! I'm so glad you are enjoying Thea. I think that character has so much potential and I thought of you when she slapped Sara :)! And yes you are right we might see Sara again, but I hope it won't be too bad. It's all coming to a head soon. Thanks so much for reading and replying! It means the world to me. So excited for S3!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2014